vs This ismy finished fish, so once I got it fired I painted it and then I put some varnish on and this is what it looks. Nice Right! What colours would you use to paint your clay?
Hi Capri! I'm Cate from Belfast School. Your fish is awesome and colourful, I like how you made it so you can see both fish; before and after. Your description is really good and thoughtful. It made me think of all the different clay animals of Room 6 that I've seen before. Next time think about saying more about what was hard, fun and easy to do with it. Ka pai!
hello Capri i'm Liam from kokatahi school i like your fish and i would paint it orange and what was your fish doing thats some thing that i would write about.
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Hi Capri! I'm Cate from Belfast School.
ReplyDeleteYour fish is awesome and colourful, I like how you made it so you can see both fish; before and after. Your description is really good and thoughtful. It made me think of all the different clay animals of Room 6 that I've seen before. Next time think about saying more about what was hard, fun and easy to do with it. Ka pai!
Cate
hello Capri i'm Liam from kokatahi school i like your fish and i would paint it orange and what was your fish doing thats some thing that i would write about.
ReplyDeleteHi capri I like your interesting fish work and the baby blue eyes
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