Hi Capri, You have put alot of thought into this. I definitly agree. Large times on a device is very bad for you and can really damage your eyes. This is a very good peice of persuasive writing. My class have been writing persuasive peices about zoos. I personally think zoos should stay open, what do you think? Do you enjoy persuuasive writing? I think that it is a nice change from normal writing. Nice job Capri i fully agree with you. Bye Capri -Sophia
Hi Capri,
ReplyDeleteYou have put alot of thought into this. I definitly agree. Large times on a device is very bad for you and can really damage your eyes. This is a very good peice of persuasive writing. My class have been writing persuasive peices about zoos. I personally think zoos should stay open, what do you think? Do you enjoy persuuasive writing? I think that it is a nice change from normal writing. Nice job Capri i fully agree with you.
Bye Capri
-Sophia