Kia Ora Capri, I am Jason from Belfast School. I really like how descriptive you were in your poem, especially when you include one of your four senses in your poem. This blogpost reminds me of waking up on a bright morning and going to the beach. Maybe next time you could change the colour of different words to make the poem really stand out! Do you enjoy going to the beach?
We write a poem about our special place and it was inspired by James K Baxter
Kia Ora Capri, I am Jason from Belfast School.
ReplyDeleteI really like how descriptive you were in your poem, especially when you include one of your four senses in your poem. This blogpost reminds me of waking up on a bright morning and going to the beach. Maybe next time you could change the colour of different words to make the poem really stand out! Do you enjoy going to the beach?